i wrote a harry potter fanfic Options
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Draco walked into his closet and got out his favorite pants and sexiest shirt. He put them on and put his cloak on over his dreamy outfit. He wanted to look good for his trip home. Draco had arranged it so that there would be only one compartment for his crush to sit in, Draco’s compartment. After getting everything together, Draco walk out of Hogwarts and onto the train to make sure everyone was in the seats Draco had given them.

Harry got on the Hogwarts Express and was on his way home to the terrible house of his horrible Uncle Vernon and his miserable Aunt Petunia. Ron decided to sit with his girlfriend and his girlfriend wanted to sit with her fellow house members at the front of the train. Hermione was no where to be found and there was no room left on the train.

Harry finally found an empty compartment and started to make his way to it. Unfortunately, someone else also saw the empty compartment and got there first. Harry looked down at his feet and sighed then looked up to talk to the person to see if they would share the compartment. Harry saw who the person was and his jaw dropped.

Harry was staring at his blonde rival, Draco Malfoy. Harry turned around without saying anything and tried to walk back down the aisle to another compartment. Just then he heard a voice behind him say, “There’s no other compartment free. I guess we’re being forced to be tolerant of each other until the train stops. Come and sit before I change my mind.”

Harry still shocked from what he heard finally pulled himself together and walked over to the compartment with the blonde foe. Harry sat and looked into his lap to avoid the deadly eye contact that he had avoided all year.

“What’s the matter? Too scared to look at me? Or are you to nervous because you don’t think you be able to control yourself if you see my wonderful body?” Draco said seeing that Harry had been trying not to look at him.

Harry, still looking down, said, "What gives you the idea that I lean to that side of the tree? If you had asked me before you spoke you would have known that this lonely monkey is on the opposite side of the tree from you. This monkey doesn't want to look at you any more than he has to."

Draco knew what Harry meant when he said this.Harry meant that he was straight and wasn't interested in Draco at all. Draco, having come out in fifth year shortly after leaving the Malfoy Manor, was very disappointed. He thought at least he might have a chance with friendship with his arch rival and number one crush because of a party the two attended. During a regular round of 'Truth or Dare' someone spiked Harry's drink with Veritaserum. Harry then confessed to wanting to be friends with a certain person who had offered him friendship in first year that Harry had denied.

Draco, being a Malfoy and not afraid to show his feelings, moved to Harry's seat. Harry instantly jumped to the seat Draco had previously occupied. Draco sighed and looked into his own lap. He then said, "Look... I'm sorry for everything I've done to you and your friends. I was jealous of them. Remember when I offered you my friendship in first year?"

Harry now looked up to see Draco's head down just as Harry had just had his. He then said, "Yeah... I denied you and we became rivals... end of story."

Draco looked up and finally made the eye contact he had been waiting for. Draco said, "I'm afraid it's not that simple." Draco paused still gazing into the vivid green eyes of his crush. His eyes are so mysterious. Harry thought as he continued to stare at Draco. Cold and sharpblue like a knife that cuts into your soul, but warm and silvery like the shimmer of unicorn hair in sunlight. They are so captivating. Why can't I look away? Draco started to reach forHarry's handbut pulled back for the fear of what Harry's reaction might be.

Draco continued, "Yes, we became enemies and tried to injure each other as often as possible, but I've always longed for that friendship I never received. I purposely missed you during all of our duels and battles. I never wanted to hurt you. I guess, what I'm trying to say is..."Draco paused trying to get the words to come out of his mouth. Finally he said, "Will you forgive me and accept my friendship?"

Harry shocked by what he was hearing could not speak or move for most of the train ride home. He just sat there staring off into space, lost in recollection of what had just happened. Dracowas neervous for the first time in his life. He really wanted harry to say yes, but he understood if Harry said no. If Harry did say yes maybe, Draco thought, I could get him to see things from 'my point of view'.

Finally, Harry spoke, "Wow... this is very... surreal. When I got onto the train today, I expected to sit with my friends. But, instead I sat with someone I believed to be an enemy." Harry looked ineo his lap once more, making Draco even more uncomfortable. Harry continued, "I guess I was wrong about my secong assumption and right about the first." Harry looked back up at Draco. "The answer is yes, but only on two conditions."

Draco, not caring what he had to do to make Harry his friend, asked what the conditions were. Harry replied, "You have to pretend I said no again and..." Harry paused trying to find the right words.

Draco, extremely impatient, said, "What? What is the last condition? I have no problem with the first."

Harry cleared his throat, silencing Draco. He then said, "The last condition is something I feel will be hard for you to do. I have noticed that it has been very hard this year for you to do, espeially today in this compartment. You have to promise you will stop hitting on me and flirting with me. I have already told you I don't bat for your team."

Draco, keeping his mask up so Harry couldn't see, blushed. maybe I had made my feelings a little too well known by trying to take his hand. "Okay," Draco replied, "I guess I can do that if it is the only way you will be my friend."

The train stopped. Draco and Harry got off and went their seperate ways.

During the first week of summer Harry got two letters: one from Hermione (as ususal) and one from his new friend, Draco. Harry couldn't believe it, but it confirmed what happened on the train. Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy had a relation between them that wouldn't end in death.


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harry potter sucks
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#3 Posted: : Friday, May 18, 2007 4:43:58 AM
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Gunslinger wrote:
harry potter sucks
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I like to make werewolf movies.


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#4 Posted: : Friday, May 18, 2007 5:50:37 AM
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i like harry potter.
yeah, i'm a cranky 'oul fucker. deal with it.
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#5 Posted: : Friday, May 18, 2007 6:48:40 AM
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Gunslinger wrote:
harry potter sucks


excuse me wtf r u doin


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#6 Posted: : Friday, May 18, 2007 6:53:34 AM
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where'd ya find that gay harry potter thing anyway? some wierd fans out there...
yeah, i'm a cranky 'oul fucker. deal with it.
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#7 Posted: : Friday, May 18, 2007 8:46:05 AM
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fukin fags, dicks are for chicks

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#8 Posted: : Friday, May 18, 2007 8:59:29 AM
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this has nothing on the warhammer 40k fanfic SQUAD BROKEN, you want i should show you?
In an hour of Darkness a blind man is the best guide. In an age of Insanity look to the madman to lead the way.

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stealth wrote:
Gunslinger wrote:
harry potter sucks
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#10 Posted: : Friday, May 18, 2007 3:31:56 PM
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N3rd wrote:
stealth wrote:
Gunslinger wrote:
harry potter sucks

TripleBam wrote:
I was about to correct something but....no...it's all there.

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Holy fuck. J-Town is a genius!


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Whole lotta words that add up to "hey everyone I'm a giant faggot"

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I just remember chewing it for 5 minutes before giving up. I tried to fit the whole slab into my mouth and some of it started sliding down to where I started to gag on it. I ended up pulling the whole 7" piece by the very tail end from my esophagus before stuffing it under my seat cushion.

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MakeSureItsCharcoalGrilled wrote:
i like harry potter.

lol?

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